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Glistening with sensuality,
Entwined around each other delicately,
As if blown and twisted gently by a soft breeze,
Set in place eternally,
Glittering together as fire and ice.
©2007-2009 ~alainnaingeal
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another little english poem,
what do you think its talking about?
be creative.

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:iconpuwen:
I think it's talking about *censored*
:P

Just kidding. I like the way it flows; you describe something very simple, and yet leave it open to interpretation for the reader :)

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:iconalainnaingeal:
lol, could well be huh. lol

yeah, it took me a little bit to get it down, i thought of the last line first because she gave us this theme to work from, so i kinda worked backwards... mayb thats the secret to good poetry. lol

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